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Discordia page 129 by aiSAKU Discordia page 129 by aiSAKU
After reading some books on how to make comics, I've realized how unorthodox and chaotic Discordia's pace is... And yet it still seems to work, what do you think?

There are 2 geek references here, catch em both, and get a cookie.
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SHarles25 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010
Ring of Power, that's surely geek

and the only next thing I could is probably the T-Shirt, if only I could clearly see what's on i =p
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madmatt88 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010  Hobbyist
The shirt... Was that Nell as a fairy?

And Mia dressed in Drew's style.... maybe not... is it her hair style that mimics Drews at the beginning of the comic?

Perhaps Schism talking about a power ring... some referance to some magical artifacts...
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aiSAKU Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Old geek reference, lum from urusei yatsura.

And yes, exacty! That hairstyle.

And again old geek reference> Green Lantern.
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firelord101 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010
ya i agree with kingsshadow
but i still like discordia
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aiSAKU Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Interesting. If you're interested too you can read my reply to kingshadow above.
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kingsshadow Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010
thank you... and so do i... just gets confusing sometimes...
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kingsshadow Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010
if you ask me... most of this comic is confusing... it skips from place to place and(i think it may be because you do both english and spanish versions) the dialogue is also hard to follow... the art is good... but its sometimes hard to understand whats what though you try to explain it through the dialogue, it doesnt work out all the time... i think you should probably take a page or two to summaries everything in great lengths... and just for see suggestion results... i think itd be good if you add more people with unique abilities like schism... and keep a few as semi-main characters...
but this is all in my own opinion... im not trying to force my thoughts and ideas as facts or criticize it wrongly and unjustly...
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aiSAKU Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I agree that it could be more streamlined... This a bit of a first, rough effort to make a long story, and it shows. Then again there's this fine line where 'improvement'becomes 'be a bit more like everyone else'and while that would certainly make the comic more accesible it would make it a lot more boring. Just for kicks, I made a sketch of what could Discordia be if it was just 5 characters and they're all teenagers, drawn in an animesque style. I laughed.
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kingsshadow Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010
if you dont want to go mainstream... you could try a blend of cult(stories that are not the norm but are still popular) and mainstream(whats most popular, which right now is battle)... if that were so and it worked out well... i believe it could be an amazing story... and i would love to see that drawing... i think it would be really good... and well... i just want to see it...
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kingsshadow Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010
also... you should keep the professor stuck like that... itd be funny and cool...
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